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Nights of Loneliness,
Days of Despair,
A world that awaits,
Filled without Aspire.


Banquets without appetite,
Times devoid of thirst..
My Life'd be the first,
Like a brittle stalactite.


Breezes feeling scorched,
Breath scented parched,
All that invites me,
Are whiffs of smoke
And a world of Ash.
Living in a world of Ashes indeed!
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aswing303 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2010  Professional Filmographer
mmm mmm mmm u' know...
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nikhithaniX Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2010
:worry:
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irnmaiden07 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2010  Student General Artist
Then get back up you phoenix! =P Lovely writing.. Depressing though..
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sohansurag Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
I am no Phoenix...once I burn...I stay in the ashed to be swept away by the winds :( SIGH!
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irnmaiden07 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2010  Student General Artist
Pinnaee.. wow.. just one week and the phoenix flew away :lol:
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sohansurag Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
Phoenix is still stuck in the ashes...if only there was smone who cud help.... :(
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irnmaiden07 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010  Student General Artist
Well if the Phoenix would shake off some of the ashes, and not look part of the bleak ashy background, maybe someone looking to help could actually help!
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saraswathi Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
"....But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep."



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sohansurag Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
Nah I'll have a pass on that! :D
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saraswathi Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
:)
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